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This piece feels like someone speaking softly into the future, holding onto the hope that the person meant for them is still on their way.

It carries the ache of years passing too quickly, of watching life blur by while the heart waits for someone it hasn’t met yet.

There’s something deeply human in imagining a face you’ve never seen and still feeling the longing as if it were memory.

The slow‑dance invitation feels like a wish for gentleness for someone who arrives late but arrives right.

The poem admits to detours, loneliness, and missed timing, yet refuses to let go of the belief that connection is still possible.

Its faith in fate is tender and wounded, the kind that keeps breathing even when it’s tired of hoping.

The promise to immortalize the beloved in poems feels like love preparing a place long before the person appears.

What moves most is the desire not just to be loved, but to know how one’s own name sounds in another person’s heart.

The poem holds longing with softness, turning vulnerability into something almost luminous.

What lingers is a quiet plea: when we finally meet, let it be real, and let it be enough.

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